LaizaBraine

Quick Update — Book 1 Edits
          	Hey everyone! Just a heads up on some changes I've made to existing chapters:
          	Formatting pass — I went through and cleaned up punctuation, italicised Elvish speech and internal thoughts consistently throughout, and tidied up a few repeated paragraphs that had crept in by accident.
          	Chapter splits — A handful of chapters were getting quite long, so I've split them at natural scene breaks to make them easier to read. The content is the same, just better paced.
          	Content additions — I've added some new scenes and expanded a few existing ones, particularly around Calmoriel's gifts awakening on the Anduin and the night watch conversations between Legolas, Gimli, and Aragorn. These scenes help set up threads that will carry into Book 2, so if you've already read those chapters it might be worth a quick revisit.
          	Nothing major has changed in terms of plot — these are all polish and expansion edits, not rewrites.
          	Thanks for your patience while I get everything into shape. Book 2 is in progress and I'm excited for what's coming. As always, comments and kudos mean the world. ❤️

LaizaBraine

Quick Update — Book 1 Edits
          Hey everyone! Just a heads up on some changes I've made to existing chapters:
          Formatting pass — I went through and cleaned up punctuation, italicised Elvish speech and internal thoughts consistently throughout, and tidied up a few repeated paragraphs that had crept in by accident.
          Chapter splits — A handful of chapters were getting quite long, so I've split them at natural scene breaks to make them easier to read. The content is the same, just better paced.
          Content additions — I've added some new scenes and expanded a few existing ones, particularly around Calmoriel's gifts awakening on the Anduin and the night watch conversations between Legolas, Gimli, and Aragorn. These scenes help set up threads that will carry into Book 2, so if you've already read those chapters it might be worth a quick revisit.
          Nothing major has changed in terms of plot — these are all polish and expansion edits, not rewrites.
          Thanks for your patience while I get everything into shape. Book 2 is in progress and I'm excited for what's coming. As always, comments and kudos mean the world. ❤️

lilyhocken426

If your website is in process, have you made cover art for its stories?

LaizaBraine

@lilyhocken426 some of them not all of them yet. I am mainly focusing on getting thigs set up at this point in time. But the cover for the other book Shadow's Fangs was done by me
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LaizaBraine

Slow progress but slowly getting done
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LaizaBraine

No not yet since I am doing this during my spare time and both writing by myself I’ve been doing a little at a time 
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LaizaBraine

Hey everyone it been a while, just letting everyone know that I am working on the first book of an original series. I just released the first couple chapters and will be updating as I go. Plan on multiple series in his universe I have created and many small side stories. So please check it out.

LaizaBraine

Sorry guys. It looks like they deleted my book because someone claimed it was against copy right. I am sorry but right now I just find myself realy pissed off!;( I mean I gave the author credit and wasn't claiming it as my work. Just give me time to cool down. EEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LaizaBraine

Hey guy. So I'm not going to be updating any time soon. My grades are slipping because of theirs. So I'll be updating during my next holiday brake. :( sorry!

LaizaBraine

That makes me fell a little better. I feel bad having to stop updating this book. Even for a short period of time.
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LunaNicoLittleRed

It's ok.  Just as long as you don't outright abandon it.  = D  I hope your grades get better.
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