hello lalakahulumulu .
you made a good story , it is compelling with potential for character development . with the lack of tower blitz content nowadays , i believe you can surpass those high on the ranks of the tower blitz tag , especially the "Rehabilitate: Tower Blitz" story . it is a disgrace and spits on the work of osyterdog .
however, i must warn you regarding burnout which is rather common within the field of writing fanfction , especially within tower blitz . writing fanfction the videogame "tower blitz" gives me fatigue quicker than writing for others for some reason, so i hope you do not have such issues .