BTPolcari
Hello there!
Thanks for adding my story, Chronicles of a Wineux: Chicken Soup Can't Heal Cell Phones, to your reading list. I hope you thoroughly enjoy the story and have a few LOL moments. And hopefully Sara and Mauzzy provide enough humor to pull you along until the plot catches up. I am working on an abridged version that will correct the early pacing issues.
Thanks again and have a great day!
BTPolcari
Thanks for the FANTASTIC feedback!! Yes, you nailed Sara's character - she is predictable in an unpredictable way. I'm gonna have to use that one! You are quite correct, writing the story was a labor of love - many days I sat in front of the screen and 4-5 hours later, I turned off the light with maybe two paragraphs written. And don't get me started on the editing - because - I still am!!! ;)
Now, I am off to--edit. Sigh.
Good luck with finals - I will post the initial chapters of the abridged this Tuesday with a few more on Friday. Right from the first chapter you will notice some tweaks. ;););)
LamaHijazi
i have just finished the story and i gotta say i am currently smiling fondly while writing this. (The Roll Tide memory is still fresh in my mind, so Sara)
I loved Sara's mind, her adventures with cellphones' creative way of dying have never failed to make me laugh everytime, especially with the Grim Reaper
Sara is predictable in an unpredictable way which doesnt make sense but does, in way?
The plot is well thought of and it's genius, i actually did suspect Edna to be behind this! Its always the quiet ones
i'm going through Finals week as well, but unlike Sara i didn't spend my weekend helping federal agents.. Rather helping Sara crack the mystery..but hey! No regrets! It was an awesome read (which probably means it had been a tough write for you) but yea good job! And good luck with the abridged version!
