outlawed_illusion
Hi, can you check this one? https://my.w.tt/ae883gzWi4
LamianDiavol
@kya_tf First off, if you wanna be more professional (?) Then capitalize the beginning of each stanza. For spelling just copy-paste into a Google Doc but I think your spelling is perfect. Though, I would try to make sure all parts "flow" and make sure that some parts aren't word-ier than others. After you've done all that, if you like, I'll reread it closely and see if there are any errors, but otherwise it's really amazing and poetic. 10/10 would read again ^-^
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