imaginethebest

Hi love! :) If you ever have time could you please check out my fan fiction 'my moment'? I would love to hear your opinion on it! It would mean so much to me! :) Thanks so much! Hope you have a lovely day! :) all the love

Lana94Banana

@imaginethebest Hi, sure I will give it a go :D.. Have a nice day, xoxo IH
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styles_orama

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          Hello, love!

styles_orama

@Lana94Banana
            
            They'll open up more to each other as they get more familar with the other. Right now everything is either awkward or flirty....no real comfort zone yet. Harry especially having to come to terms with his situation. 
            
            I love them. They're my people. lolol
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Lana94Banana

@styles_orama Yeah, got that from chapter 21, I think that is a great idea, for her to make him even more insecure, because I think it will give Sherry and Harry just enough drama... Hahaha I agree that Harr needs to get laid, especially 'cause he didn't get any from Paige in a long time but I think that you should wait a bit longer. Especially now that Paige did what she did,  I think you should wait for him to open up about his insecurities more to Sherry so she can show him that she really likes him and cares for him, and spends her free time with him because she wants to do that not because she gets paid for taking care of him. In my opinion they should wait for that, but maybe start with some other stuff since Harry doesn't even know if he can get it up :D and maybe make them more emotionaly connected before sex :)
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styles_orama

Thanks for taking the time to give feedback!!
            
            Yeah, I don't want Paige to be the major obstacle. Harry's situation is the obstacle. Basically I wanted her to plant insecurities in his mind about his situation. Witch.
            
            I want Harry to get laid, but I dunno if he can.... :(
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scooby-snacks

Hi :) Thankyou for adding my book to your reading list! I hope you enjoy it :)

scooby-snacks

@Lana94Banana ah really? that's awesome, thankyou so much for reading! :)
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Lana94Banana

@scooby-snacks Hiiiiii... Glad to say I enjoyed it very much :)
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