JustABrokenTeen

Hi I absolutely hate doing this but currently my past followers are dead, due to my two month break. I noticed your comment under a walking dead fan fiction and I’m currently writing one about Carl, it’s an alternate universe and It would mean a lot if u could check it out and maybe save it to your library if u enjoy it. Feedback and opinions are greatly appreciated as I’m trying to improve my writing due to my dyslexia:/
          
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LanaLolitaRosa

@JustABrokenTeen I'm sorry I just now saw this comment,but the only advice I have for TWD or Carl fanfics are that try to stay on the path of the show or comic,it's ok to change small thing but when writers go totally off path it's confusing and sometimes frustrating,also for Carl try to remember his age like if you start at season 1 don't make it too mature at first like most kids at that age are just friends it shouldn't get too mature of relationships until like ending of the prison because of his age,it's weird when they are like 10 and talking about kissing or some adult crap. And try to keep your characters not to wild try to imagine yourself or someone you know as a character like personality wise so it's more natural
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