Lance1889

Watching a lot of Deltarune stuff, and... I've been making a story taking the one side of that game's story, the Light and Dark world stuff, while removing the Meta parts, and putting my own spin on it and focusing more on world(s) and characters.
          	
          	Still working on the plot, suggestions are welcome;
          	
          	Dualitale
          	Plot Description:
          	Dusk, a human teen who’s life amongst Sanctuary, a town full of Beasts, magic wielding animals, is slowly crumbling before him, after an incident he doesn’t remember. His adoptive mother and father divorced, his adoptive brother has fallen completely off the map, his childhood friend in the Festus family avoids him, the oldest sister of the Festus family has run away, the other kids whisper behind his back unaware he can hear them, and he’s constantly bullied by a delinquent Beast named Tina.
          	One day at school, Dusk travels into a mysterious place inside the supply closet. There he meets Capri, a polite being of this realm, who explains what’s going on. There exists three plains of the whole galaxy, the world of Light, a world of pure everlasting and monotonous light ruled by the Pillar of Light, Lux, their world which is the World of Balance, and the World of Shadow, a world of endless and chaotic darkness, ruled by the Pillar of Shadow, Tenebrae. 
          	These worlds once remained separated, however, something has disrupted the balance, and now there is an imbalance threatening the World of Balance. There stands an ancient prophecy; If the world is to fall into discourse, Warriors of Harmony, a Human, His Beastly Allies, and a prince born of a Balanced Basin, must these Shadow Realms and Light Havens from the World of Balance to save the world from falling out of control.

Wolfzero1

@Lance1889 my friend, Oath helps me when he can. You could try to ask Oachkeeper if he has the time to do it. But only if he can.
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Lance1889

@Wolfzero1 Thanks, do you know a good editor that could help me?
          	  @NexusCrow-X Ye.
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NexusCrow-X

@Lance1889 Dusk's life story, the pillars of light and shadows, the prophecy, etc. Seems very mysterious and full of thrill. 
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Lance1889

Watching a lot of Deltarune stuff, and... I've been making a story taking the one side of that game's story, the Light and Dark world stuff, while removing the Meta parts, and putting my own spin on it and focusing more on world(s) and characters.
          
          Still working on the plot, suggestions are welcome;
          
          Dualitale
          Plot Description:
          Dusk, a human teen who’s life amongst Sanctuary, a town full of Beasts, magic wielding animals, is slowly crumbling before him, after an incident he doesn’t remember. His adoptive mother and father divorced, his adoptive brother has fallen completely off the map, his childhood friend in the Festus family avoids him, the oldest sister of the Festus family has run away, the other kids whisper behind his back unaware he can hear them, and he’s constantly bullied by a delinquent Beast named Tina.
          One day at school, Dusk travels into a mysterious place inside the supply closet. There he meets Capri, a polite being of this realm, who explains what’s going on. There exists three plains of the whole galaxy, the world of Light, a world of pure everlasting and monotonous light ruled by the Pillar of Light, Lux, their world which is the World of Balance, and the World of Shadow, a world of endless and chaotic darkness, ruled by the Pillar of Shadow, Tenebrae. 
          These worlds once remained separated, however, something has disrupted the balance, and now there is an imbalance threatening the World of Balance. There stands an ancient prophecy; If the world is to fall into discourse, Warriors of Harmony, a Human, His Beastly Allies, and a prince born of a Balanced Basin, must these Shadow Realms and Light Havens from the World of Balance to save the world from falling out of control.

Wolfzero1

@Lance1889 my friend, Oath helps me when he can. You could try to ask Oachkeeper if he has the time to do it. But only if he can.
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Lance1889

@Wolfzero1 Thanks, do you know a good editor that could help me?
            @NexusCrow-X Ye.
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NexusCrow-X

@Lance1889 Dusk's life story, the pillars of light and shadows, the prophecy, etc. Seems very mysterious and full of thrill. 
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Lance1889

I am also having the weirdest weather, it's thundering, yet it's sunny, and no wind.

NexusCrow-X

@Lance1889 Yesterday one moment it's a hot day and then, it was pouring like crazy. 
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Lance1889

@NexusCrow-X Yeah, it's just cloudy right now, but I guess it's gonna start up raining soon.
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NexusCrow-X

@Lance1889 Crazy weather, am I right?
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Lance1889

Welp, my mom died today. And I feel nothing. I know it sounds cruel, but she basically killed any love or care I had for her. 
          For those not aware, my mother was a Drug Whore, sold and took drug, she choose drugs and stole from her whole family even got one of my sisters hooked, so I feel nothing towards her death.

Autobot-Wolverine

@Lance1889 I know how it feels to have a Complicated Relationship with a parent. Before my dad Passed he and I had a Rocky relationship. Despite him Raising me well he can be extreme sometimes like threatening to Murder me if my Grades didn't go up. Our last Conversation Before he passed he became so irritating to handle And if Mom hadn't Intervened...... Well let's just say I'd be in Prison.
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silverscribe85

@Lance1889 So sorry for your loss, dude; all the same
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Omnikingod

@Lance1889 honestly I don't blame you for not feeling anything for your mother.
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Lance1889

So I just discovered Stiff Neck the hard way, so here's a friendly reminder to Turn Your Neck and Head.

GreenLanternSimon

@Lance1889 Alright, just hang in there bro. We’re with you all the way.
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Lance1889

@GreenLanternSimon I'm fine, just needed to turn my head a lot and often.
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GreenLanternSimon

@Lance1889 Uh, are you going to be okay?
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Lance1889

May the 4th be with you

kingbea2

@Lance1889  May the 4th be you! (Yes I know I'm a little late but bah!)
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DanaM00

MAY THE 4TH BE WITH YOU EVERYONE!!!!!!!
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