You have no idea how you just made my day. I honestly have been thinking long and hard about what I wanted to do with it and trashing and starting over seemed like the best option but now I am glad I didn't. Thank you for the tips and your support!
It is pretty good for your first book! I suggest describing things in more depth. Also try to make chapters a little longer ,but If you do describe things in more depth,length will come. Good Job Though!!!