Lara16

Hii (K) 
          
          I was just wondering if you could please check out my story - In the World of Women. I've just started out and this is my first attempt so I'd be extremely grateful for any feedback at all.
          
          Thanks ;) 
          d4l 
          xxxx
          

hi, would you mind reading my story, i would love some constructive criticism and what you think about it
          
          "All Boy's School Survival Guide" for girls
          
          Synopsis:
          
          Aliza is in a binding situation, literally! With her breasts constricted, wearing her brother's loose clothing, and dropping her voice to the lowest level, she's attending Ascham, an all boy's school! If that's not enough, throw in an extremely hot roommate, who suspects Aliza, aka Alex, of not being exactly what "he" appears to be and you have a chaotic relationship---if you can even call it that.
          http://www.wattpad.com/257206-quot-all-boys-school-survival-guide-quot-for-girls
          
          PS. Please read till ch 2 before you decide to continue reading or not

Yay :D 
          thanks for becoming a fan!!
          can't believe you've already read 12 chpts! wow :D
          you're amazing!!
          <3Rach

OMG!!!!!
          I finished it a few hours ago
          and I can tell you it is AMAZING!!!!!!!!!
          I loved it. like omg. lol
          What part of australia do you live in?
          and i play netball too lol
          
          xoxox Katelyn

G'day,
          
          thanks for the message and i did add you too! :D
          
          hot background picture :P
          
          xoxo 
          Cait

hi :):) 
          i was just wondering if you could check out my story called 
          Pheobes Life??? 
          i was just looking for some critisism or suggestions?? 
          please comment and le me know :):) 
          thankyuu :):)