Larrikin2

Don't know if this will work, but I'll try to post some stats for my stories: 
          	
          	Total   	                                             18-25	25-35	25-45	45+
          	Reads
          	84 Cultivating the Gardener	54%	26%	3%		13%
          	73	Taming a Shrew			40		44 		0		16
          	57	Sakshi's Tail				52		12		8		20
          	196	 Good Neighbours			63		23		4		7
          	95	 Mirror Dark				64		28		2		6
          	240	 Sound Spanking			48		31		3		9
          	3522 Girl next Door		        	58		30		4 		3
          	123  Decorating Judie			58		29		0		11
          	167	 Unlocking Secret			51		38		3		8
          	433	 Cry Uncle				        58		31		2		4
          	106	 Second Lesson		        41		41		0		11
          	182 Kelsie Ryder				58		28		0		8
          	
          	No idea why The Girl Next Door is sooo much more read than the others, or what links the ones with higher maturity reads!!

ArmyMZ

Helloo,
          
          ✨If you enjoy adventures in the outside world and a sense of intrigue, I recommend this:
          An atmosphere steeped in the complexities of the nightlife scene.
          
          If you enjoy it, please leave a vote ⭐ on your favorite chapter or follow for future updates.
          
          Happy reading❣️
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Larrikin2

Don't know if this will work, but I'll try to post some stats for my stories: 
          
          Total   	                                             18-25	25-35	25-45	45+
          Reads
          84 Cultivating the Gardener	54%	26%	3%		13%
          73	Taming a Shrew			40		44 		0		16
          57	Sakshi's Tail				52		12		8		20
          196	 Good Neighbours			63		23		4		7
          95	 Mirror Dark				64		28		2		6
          240	 Sound Spanking			48		31		3		9
          3522 Girl next Door		        	58		30		4 		3
          123  Decorating Judie			58		29		0		11
          167	 Unlocking Secret			51		38		3		8
          433	 Cry Uncle				        58		31		2		4
          106	 Second Lesson		        41		41		0		11
          182 Kelsie Ryder				58		28		0		8
          
          No idea why The Girl Next Door is sooo much more read than the others, or what links the ones with higher maturity reads!!

Larrikin2

Thanks for a kind and generous offer, and happy to join in (though I have I think just one Follower at the moment, so not a great bargain from your end!)

Larrikin2

Ah, but I write what I write because I like writing it! Free publication allows me to share for anyone like-minded, but I'm not publishing because I want to be read.  It would become work, not pleasure, if I was tailoring my out-put to fit an imagined audience whoa ctually want to ead diferent things from me.  If that makes sense?
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Larrikin2

You made a good point about the paragraphing.  I use a desk-top so hadn't  considered phone configuration, will take a look and see what's adrift, what to do next.  On the other side of the balance, I have had a look at the Gold Mine Keeper, and can see the huge difference  in format - which, swings and roundabouts - may be why you're getting less mature readers than you'd like.  That very choppy style doesn't appeal to us oldies.  If I'd come across this at random I wouldn't have gone very far at all with it.  I guess if we both want a wider readership we both need to move towards a middle-ground paragraph-wise!
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theconfusedsoul25

@theconfusedsoul25 For a quick understanding, why don't you try reading my The Gold Mine Keeper book? Just a few chapters will keep you hooked for an hour or so because my chapters are long (3000-3500 words).
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theconfusedsoul25

Hey there,
          It seems like you write great kinky stories but you hardly get any views. Maybe I can fix that for you. 
          
          Would you like to support my books in turn of me reading and commenting on your books. And if I like something I will also recommend it to my fellow readers and authors. 
          
          How does that sound?