Lars_Mortensen

chapter 14 is placed!
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/56500217

Lars_Mortensen

I am looking for 5 Beta Readers that are willing to read my story and give useful feedback to me. 
          The story is currently being rewritten and you will receive chapters from the second draft
          If you do this I will send you some questions with each chapter I will send you. This way I will get on the same points feedback from different people. 
          
          What is my story about?
          Cos is a thief and father of his adopted daughter Pi.
          Tan is one of the highest ranking generals in Weshin and Steward of Lostan.
          They are brothers, torn apart before the war, when they were sold as slaves. When they fought themselves free, they both went different ways. Thinking the other was dead.
          Now they are on very different sides of  Weshin, the country that has ripped them apart. One serving the king of Weshin, the other a thorn in its eye.
          
          Readers who like adventure, original fiction and action are more welcome to message me or mail me by larsmortensen2017@outlook.com
          I can’t give you anything as reward for helping me out, except for eternal gratitude.

Lars_Mortensen

Chapter two is reposted! As you might have noticed the other chapters that were there are no longer visible. This is because of the rewriting proces and to avoid any confusion with the changes that I am making. They will be reposted as soon as they are rewritten.
          
          - Lars Mortensen