MiriamJ1
hi I am writing my first book and I am looking for honest reviews. I would really like to improve my story. Could you give it a look?
https://www.wattpad.com/1212403032?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading_part_end&wp_uname=MiriamJ1&wp_originator=gO1iXXJx5DERhd73ml5kWepRQxZpxMdcPTa9Cq7bDUSP%2BtUL0NiBbBkL0%2BGKkYBPLj%2Fw2boogITuvzytuogw53ag5JYbjMjEEp8FVboW5A4UcPF66MlsFp3d8QFCAksg
