ofthebridegroom
Merry Christmas LasKelly
Laskelly_b
DaraAdetula
Thanks for your votes on MTBF and for adding it to your reading lists.☺
Ad_zy1
Thank you for adding Her Musings to your reading list!
RElizabethM
Thanks for adding Saving Us to such a great reading list. I appreciate the support for the story. :)
RElizabethM
@laskelly_b Ah, my bestie’s books. :) We have a lot of fun giving each other a hard time. :) Glad to hear you enjoyed my work as well. :)
Laskelly_b
@RElizabethM Uwc. I love your comments on Collette's works so I decided to check out your page. Saving us is your second book that I've read Movie star memories is the first and I enjoyed both
AnneeSparrow
Hey there lovely! Thank you for reading Fingertips. I hope you enjoyed it xx
preshywhite
OK
I have heard
preshywhite
Well u said u scanned it
Did u check other chapters
And before I forget
Everyone makes mistake
When ur correcting someone
Say it kindly
At least the person will accept as an advice and not a discouragement
Laskelly_b
@preshywhite I read the prologue and first chapter and they didn't do it for me so I skimmed and scanned through the others. You can't continue reading what doesn't entice you. Also, I just stated what I thought as you asked me to, which was why I added honestly. You can't expect to me to plead for something I think as not being great. I never said people don't make mistakes, you have over 5 chapters, the least you could have done is to proof read and edit the ones you already published. You asked for what I thought and I stated it for you, if you felt it was a discouragement, it's your own fault for not accepting constructive criticism... Have a nice day
preshywhite
Hi
Laskelly_b
@preshywhite Honestly, I just skimmed and scanned through the chapters. I couldn't actually read the chapters because: 1; The paragraphing of the sentences wasn't neat and arranged 2; There was no punctuation, and it made me quite uncomfortable reading 3; You didn't choose a style of writing, I mean you were switching between prose and drama 4; The story didn't draw me at all, the beginning was quite boring and cliche to me 5; The grammar is filled with errors...
preshywhite
@laskelly can you kindly check out my books and tell me what you think in the comment "Beautiful me"
YvonneGrace1
Hey beautiful, thank you so much for adding Battle Of The Heir And Heiress to your reading list. I hope you'll enjoy reading it :))
Osaro_Oghadeva
Thank you for adding BREATHE to your reading list. I appreciate. I hope you enjoy the story. Please don't forget to comment and vote as you go through the story. Thanks again.