Hi I think your story was amazing but I think that what you could do ( not being rude just being helpful) is you could ask your followers to come up with some ideas for a another story and that might help it be even better not saying it is not good just saying that you could do that just to be nice or to see what other people have to say ;)
@Jasmine1416 OMG That's so sweet of you to say!! Thank you so so so so so so so much!! Really!! You have no idea how happy you made me!!! Like really!!! I'm smiling like crazy because of you're message!! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3