@LauXx6o6
Thank you for reading, voting and commenting on Perfect Imperfection! I love feedback! I appreciate you!
@ShayCookie12 it's no problem at all, I loved reading it! I didn't see a lot of stories like your with Mayuri and it was written very well!
Idk if anyone is reading this, but I'm not really into my writing right now. I've got some things going irl and while I am not doing a lot, my mental health isn't very good.
Hey your shorts are awesome!
So I guess your high standards are paying of. Your writing is far better than most texts I have come upon around here so far, and "Short Stories" has elements usually used by someone who knows what he/she is doing. The time jumps, changes in point of view; you could even write screenplays. I was not surprised to see that you also like drawing, since it is at the very base of visual storytelling... Just don't be too hard on yourself to the point it stops you from showing your work off. Keep on!
So I guess the standards you're imposing on yourself are paying of - your writing is far better than most texts I have come across here on Wattpad. And additionally to its general quality, in the shorts I have read so far you use time jumps and changes of points of view as someone who knows what he/she is doing. I'm pretty experienced and I also know what I am saying, trust me. You could even write screenplays with such abilities - I was not surprised to see you also draw in you profile description, since drawing is also on the base of visual storytelling. Keep on!
