preachful

Hi, Can you check out my new fanfic and tell me what u think of it? thanks

LauraBecerra154

@fleekbieber hey I read your story and I really liked it just that you sometimes repeated the same details  over and over agian and you were too descriptive (that's just me) but other than that it was really good!  Keep up the good work! Since I read yours how about you check out mine and tell me what you think? 
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