I'm an avid reader who loves to be transported into an amazing story , I barely comment on others works unless I find them to be of epic proportions

Wrote this at 16

"As the tears ran down her soft pale cheeks she realized that she truly does love him & she couldn't stand knowing she lost him but she knew she could never get him back ,
How could he ever ( still ) love her ? She had ruined her one chance at true love & happiness ,
Now all she could do was weep and pray to the Gods for her lovers forgiveness .If only he knew that she was truly sorry , that she really does love him , one last chance thts all she wants ,  she had made mistakes in the past but Vowed this time would be different "
Now she just needs to prove to him, he owns her heart and soul