Laura Correa

Your stories needs to be in order 

Why does your Characters has the same names and surnames it confuse me if they are sequel or spin off but you didn't even put a sequel or spin off in it

Just finished reading the alpha's mate it needs a sequel. Telling the story of the kids...

Hey everybody, I have updated the book His Kids. I had been editing it for a few days now and the new edition is up and ready to be read, don't forget to leave your comments and to like the book.
          
          Love you all

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Your recent update of the mafia lord and the cartel princess, saving her isnt working. I keep getting failed to load notification. Did something happen and it get removed? Enjoying your book and patiently awaiting updates. Thank you!! 

i love the egyptian names 
          gives sadie and carter kane vibes

I would like to suggest going through your books and doing spell checks. Many times it is the wrong word listed. Many of your books could go from a 6/10 and increase 2-4 points. Those incorrect words are a distraction. Sometime reading it again you figure out the word and other times it takes a few guesses to figure out the word that should of been there. 
          
          You have several good stories and this is a suggestion that could turn good to better 

Muchas gracias.
          Saludos.

Why do you have all of your female leads run away multiple times? I can understand running once but almost always the second time (and every time afterwards) is because of a misunderstanding that can be resolved if she acted like an adult and actually spoke to her mate. In almost every one of your stories the female runs simply because another woman hugs her mate or calls him "sweetie" not because she actually witnesses him doing wrong. I think only 2 had the man actually do something wrong with another woman. Then your female leads run away and refuse to talk to their mate, keep his children from him, and most of the time abandon their family and best friend for years. I think of all your female leads I only liked one of them and I have read all of your currently finished works.
          
          It just gets me so mad that you have so much potential and the plots are interesting but you always use running away as the only way for your female lead to handle difficulties. It is especially terrible because many of them are set up to be super strong bada$$es who don't take it from anyone but she always crumbles when it comes to conflict with the love of her life. 
          
          She never stands up to the supposed other woman until the woman targets her kids. That tells me that she just doesn't care for either her mate or herself. 
          
          Maybe in your next story you'll create female lead who will actually have a real talk with the love of her life instead of run and hide for years. Then, if she runs, I can respect her because she at least tried to resolve their issues.