Distorted Horrors

“The best clown around town!”
          
          -Your neighborhood clown  

I have a new story for you one piece fans!!

https://www.wattpad.com/1357115330?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading_part_end&wp_uname=LaurenThomson0&wp_originator=kMRYWoc0RKOvRakyEL1U0dtWMZ1p4m5KyopUvhnZxtISP9gISEbiZ2YIMraliPhXs2iGyi8DEj7rwcyRbEuOi16R0ld%2BEQBBr3cepTWkcJSIXWWktwsogdw1o9u8idld

So I watched Encanto with a friend and I’m making a story for our ocs!

I read your most popular story and I really like it! The suggestion I had is the word “said” is repeated too many times. You could say, “shouted”, “roared”, something along those lines! But besides that, I loved the first part!