Hey! You're Louis Tomlinson story was really good, and I noticed how you said that you had never written a fanfiction before, so I wanted to help you out. If you want me too, (since I'm in huge One Direction fan), I wanted to see if you would like for me to edit your story so that you could get more reads. If you want, just e-mail me at:
antoneahilliard@yahoo.com
I would be delighted to help out another Directioner.