Hi Laurendrew1999, I've already read your story. The concept was great about Virtue and her past... My comment is just can you give a justification about her actions? Because there is some point in your story that I can't understand... Rumbled characters... Highlight the main protagonist and your supporting cast... Give them a limelight but not much alike the main character.
I hope you won't disappointed by this comment or be upset... I'm just helping.. ☺...BTW God bless to you and your writing...