Spirt Dragon Lava

@LavaLikes Unfortunately for me, it’s still not loading in. I’m interested though, but it’s late and I should be asleep anyways. I’ll look over it when I get the chance, I promise!

@MoonWolf2002 It's this superhero writing challenge, if you check out my activity you may be able to see what it's all about.

Notes, I've always had a hard time with description, heheh, I tend to focus on emotions and the atmosphere more than anything else ^^; 
            Your comment about writer's block is reassuring, I'll definitely keep that in mind ;) (Sure, go ahead)

XD I am no writing Master.... I'm an apprentience. But truly, you know Character Development and how to describe emotions along with getting a reader hooked. That's a VERY good start, but on the 3 shots I suggest being a bit descriptive of the world around or mention like the color of a roof that'll be important in the next part of the story.  And when you get writers block, just write, dosen't matter how good or bad it is, re-edit later( Not my words, but if U wish to know where I got this infomation from I can direct you to the book )

Damn, what have I stumbled across here? A writing master? XD 
            I really appreciate you explaining this to me though, it's refreshing to see my book from a new, more professional point of view rather than the usual 'Oh, I love Bart, and I love your story!' comments. If only I could've had your critiques back when I wrote the story. 
            To be honest, I really wasn't sure how to proceed with the story back when I wrote it, and I had actually briefly stopped it to pick it back up months later, which I believe is part of the reason it's so... Unclear. And chunked, if you want my opinion. When I first started it, I had a direction and conflict in mind, but when I went back to writing it, I just tossed that aside, and that's how I ended up focusing more on Bart's and Reader's relationship growing. -That and, to be honest, as soon as the action was over, I really wanted to get the story over with since I was frankly bored of writing it. I would've ditched it completely had it not been for the fans pressing me to write on.- 
            Your oneshot explanation definitely makes sense, I did find it difficult to pick up the pace and to really focus on the story at hand when the time came -around Chapter 10, I believe?-. You directly pointing it out definitely helps though, seriously, all this time, I was so confused and asking myself 'Hmm, so where did I mess up, exactly?' xD
            Thanks again for all of this, I believe you may have just given me a surge of motivation to write again! Although this time, I'll be sticking to oneshots. XD And 3-shots definitely seem interestingly, I've done a couple and they're my favourite! I sure hope I get to see you around love <3

@Clary_Lovegood Your welcome! And thanks for the votes

My friends are saying look right at the sun and be a daredevil XD
            

@LavaLikes yaaaaa

@WannaBeFamous212 CAW CAW! *Hugs Clint* U WILL LIVE UMDER MY PROTECTION
            
            Thanos: Ha- *gets stabbed
            
            Me: DIRRRRRRRRR U WILL NOT KILL THE BABY HAWK!!!! *Drags Thanos away by the chair and teleports him to a world with gtorcher methods*
            BTW blame Marvel for youre fate

So sad!!!!! He deserves more time! #LetTheBirdLiceMarvel! I'm with till the end of the line!

@WannaBeFamous212 No everybody dies in Avnger In Infinity war, Its that that hes only to get a minute of screentime and screentime is going to be of him dying ;( #LetTheBirdLiveMarvel!