@LavenderJeweler
I was reading your story yandere invincible x Starfire oc and it was really good and emotional story especially Starfire’s pov she feels kind and caring and her scenes with Mark and Eve are strong
I also have some questions like what bigger role do you want Starfire to have in the story?
@poppythemidden it's posted
Are you gonna post tomorrow or...I mean like if you're still busy writing take your time no worries seriously don't mind waiting just wanna ask
for the dagger one or the julian one? if you're refering to the dagger one the next chapter I'd suggest Okay for Chapter 2 following episode 3 I was thinking tandy would be there when oliver kills the mauler twins it started when tandy wanted to help but Cecil told her to get out of there tandy protest that she wanted to help but Cecil frimly told her no and again to tell her to get the hell out of there tandy didn't listen she tried to throw her light daggers at one of the mauler twins but tandy was badly hurt by one of the mauler twins oliver yelled out to tandy worried and protective then got angry this was the second why oliver killed the mauler twins which made tandy scared but she wasn't scared of oliver she walked over to him then told his hand reassuring him "it's alright I'm fine...." then when mark and oliver were arguing in the sky oliver brought up "they were hurting tandy! Oliver says
oliver mentioned he ages like him now ommiman had noticed the way his son looked julian he realized oliver had feelings for julian then ommiman asked the pheniox force inside julian oliver explains about it he deosn't know what's inside it ommiman sighed and explains what the pheniox force was inside julian then as then after every thing and everything when mark recovers oliver and julian renuite with him
@poppythemidden it's posted
@poppythemidden about to post now
are you gonna post soon today just asking it's okay you can take your time I'm just asking
@poppythemidden I posted a chapter
Well I know I say this but I am kind of excited and can't wait for the next chapter of the starfire invincible or Julian grey one not rushing seriously not rushing
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@poppythemidden Wednesday
@poppythemidden it's it's fine I was going to post today but I didn't get no sleep last night so I changed it