Mahi_Dy

Magekathawata vote kallata thank u dear ❤️

Lavender_99

Baba oyage kathawa harima interesting.  Eka complete kiyala thibune? Eth eka ongoing neda? 
            
            Mn podi dewal tikak dakka kathawe.
            
            1. Oya characters gana wisthara kala nm hondai kiyala hithenwa. Ethakota readers lata imagin karanna lesi
            
            2. Spelling mistakes wge muladi thibuna. Eth anthima chapters waladi eka aduwela thibuna
            
            3. Lassana wenas plot ekak. Eth mn hithanawa oya situations thawa wisthara kala nm
            hondai kiyala. Math liyaddi hari kalabalai. Ehem nowi oya imagin karana dema apitath imagine karanna ida denna.
            
            
            Wish you all the best babii !
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Mahi_Dy

@Mahi_Dy ayemath thank you sisy ❤️
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