Lavendergrass01

Hello everyone I know I have been gone for a while. Some things came up. I will return soon with updates.

TheCavernClan

Hello poet! We're a clan looking for new members, if you're interested do check out The Restricted Poetry Club ❤️

TheCavernClan

@Lavendergrass01 sure... Your poem had a beauty to it at the same time, a small hopelessness... Then improving... I think it's great as it is but you can break the second line into two..? The structure would be amazing
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Lavendergrass01

@TheCavernClan Hello, thanks for the invitation.  However I have one simple question, hope you wouldn't mind answering. Can you tell me what you thought of my first poem, 'Roses in my Garden.' Your interpretation, something I can improve on, anything!
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KierraHill21

Hi, I hope your having an amazing day. If your free and looking for something new to read, i'd really appreciate it if you would check out my new book. I just started it, so it's really short, but again it would be greatly appreciated. 

Lavendergrass01

@KierraHill21 It was no trouble at all. New authors stick together.
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KierraHill21

@Lavendergrass01 Hey, yeah, i'll take a look at your poetry :) Thank you for getting back to me. I hope you have a great day/night too 
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Lavendergrass01

@KierraHill21 
            
            Sorry forr the late reply, I just woke up. I will surely take a look. I would also appreciate if you can find time to take a look at mine. It's a collection of poetry. Constructive criticism is welcome (please be kind). Have a good day/night. 
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