1burningdesire

will u continue sparta story?

Lax_Walker

I’m thinking about it. It’s actually been on my mind a lot. I’m thinking of making a large epilogue chapter but I’m still thinking about adding a few chapters before that!
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KrasnaLidojedka

Hey! 
          Just here to support you and tell you, that I am feeling with you. Currently in the same position like you. One girl began stealing parts of my story/book into her own and now she claims that I stole them from her. She's crazy enough to create profiles here on Wattpad and comment rude comments on my book and on my wall
          
          Be strong! I am trying to be as well 
          Good luck with hateful people 

Lax_Walker

That’s terrible!!! Best of luck to you with that! If I can do anything to help please reach out!
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ForensicGirl99

Hey I just wanted to say that your original version of Carry you~Eddie Diaz was good, but I am loving the rewrites. I can't wait to read more.

Lax_Walker

@ForensicGirl99 Great suggestion! That actually gives me a different idea to incorporate. Thanks lol!!
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ForensicGirl99

@Lax_Walker Either sounds like a good idea to me. If you do keep it, it would be a good idea to make it less 'graphic'. Or you could change it from a sexual assault to a stalker situation, like a sports fan from her lacrosse days that never got over her.
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Lax_Walker

@ForensicGirl99 I have not decided yet because I was thinking of pushing her first pregnancy (with the twins) back. I was also thinking that if I did keep it I make it less 'graphic'. But I'm open to any and all thoughts!
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ForensicGirl99

I just read your new chapter and was wondering if you ever thought about doing like a cross-over with 9-1-1 lone star. Or maybe giving someone from dispatch or the 118 or even Athena or one of the officers a stalker like one of those people who become obsessed with the person who saved them. You could also bring  back Lou and have him and Athena work together more.

ForensicGirl99

@Lax_Walker No problem, happy to help.
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Lax_Walker

I can definitely work on something like that! Thank you for that idea. I’ve got a plan now because of you, thanks!!
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ForensicGirl99

Wasn't sure if you wanted me to message you her or from the story so the episodes that i had in mind was the 'Ghost stories', 'Boston', 'Hero complex', 'Crash & Learn', 'The devil you know', 'Tomorrow', 'In a flash', 'In Another Life', 'Lost & Found', 'Love is in the Air', 'Pay it Forward', and maybe First Responders.

Lax_Walker

Okay! I will look into them! Thank you!
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