Lazy_Kheb

to all those who want to read a fantasy genre, please read my new work called Domain of the Orients. i would gladly open all the comments and critiques to improve it
          	https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/194654490-domain-of-the-orient

Lazy_Kheb

i would gladly welcome all the comments and critiques to improve it.
          	  
          	  Sorry i mistype
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iamverda357

Have you ever fallen in love with someone's eyes? I ,myself, am a sucker for blue eyes. So I started writing about them, and about sileint stare and my favorite pair of eyes, and I wrote, sometimes at the late hours, when the stars twinkled and everything was silient, or at the late evenings, just a little before sunsets, when we had the times of our lives. This book means a lot to me. Writing it has been such a pleasure. So kindly, please give it to go. It would mean the world, really. I'll update very soon, I have to sort out the poetrys and write in a certain order. But each vote and comment would be highly appreciated. So please, give it a go. Love, Bushra. https://www.wattpad.com/story/195755568
          
          

Lazy_Kheb

to all those who want to read a fantasy genre, please read my new work called Domain of the Orients. i would gladly open all the comments and critiques to improve it
          https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/194654490-domain-of-the-orient

Lazy_Kheb

i would gladly welcome all the comments and critiques to improve it.
            
            Sorry i mistype
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iamverda357

I don't know how to thank you enough!
          
          I was begging my mind to open up so I could write the twenty fourth chapter of 'Ellie', and those votes just gave me the energry and the push I needed.
          You've no idea how much that means to me.
          
          Thanks. Seriously. 

Lazy_Kheb

You know you have a better narration than me. Continue doing your work and encourage yourself to write for self satisfaction.
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Random_QueenNerd

Hi there. I'm sorry for this random message, but I was wondering if you could do me the honour of checking out me book, "Written in the stars." I fully understand if you choose to decline. I know that a lot of people find these requested offensive, so if you do then you are free to go ahead and delete it. Thank you so much for reading this:-) 
          
          https://my.w.tt/quXYPyGTBW