hey @LeAnn8504 !
i fall under the category of people who want to help other people.
✿blurb
blurbwise, i think it was a little two crowded with names? like /maybe a little blunt here/ if you were to read a book and its blurb was too filled with names, chances are, you'd already skipped most of it.
✿chapters
chapterwise, i'd said fair for a first time writer.
✿wording
simple. just the way i like it.
✿overall
it's work. writing will takes a lot of patience and thinking. don't stop with the chapters.
love,
aubrey x
/and remember, i am not wasting my time typing this for nothing. i only want every wattpader a chance to improve./ c:
