LuisPetrizzoRengel

Thanks for voting my story!

LeBlueJay

@LuisPetrizzoRengel I'm aware, especially the 'usually' part. Hence I used the word inconsistent. You need a good editor to help you with your use of tenses in general. 
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LuisPetrizzoRengel

@LeBlueJay It's usually in present tense...
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LeBlueJay

@LuisPetrizzoRengel I tried to read it but your use of tenses is inconsistent and all over the place. It bothered me too much and I couldn't get into the story. 
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