@Joshben4c I'm not an expert or anything, and I have a lot of adulting to do haha, But I wouldn't mind helping you with one chapter to see what happens if you'd like me to try. As a writer, I have a group of friends who love writing. We help and inspire each other a lot. I am really blessed to have that; they are some of my closest friends. I don't know if you have a group of friends like that, who can encourage you and help you with your writing or just to listen and let you bounce ideas off them. But I highly suggest finding such people to surround yourself with, either on Wattpad or in regular life. Weather you'd like my help with anything or not is your choice I don't mind either way. And I may or may not be available all the time as I have a busy life. But, please, please, please do what you need to do to become what you can be! You have so much potential, I'm rooting for ya! Go for it!