LeStatiqueVoiture

Returning from a few years break, I now notice that everything I’ve written on here is incredibly vague. I may be selecting a few to go back and fix. I feel as though my ideas were good, just not played out well as I tend to rush through when writing. Handy tip: describe everything possible in the scene at hand so that your reader can better imagine it. 
          	-lsv

LeStatiqueVoiture

Returning from a few years break, I now notice that everything I’ve written on here is incredibly vague. I may be selecting a few to go back and fix. I feel as though my ideas were good, just not played out well as I tend to rush through when writing. Handy tip: describe everything possible in the scene at hand so that your reader can better imagine it. 
          -lsv

LeStatiqueVoiture

Dora!
Boots!
Come on, Dora
D-d-dora-d-d-d-dora
          
          Let's fight!
D-d-dora-d-d-d-dora
D-d-dora-d-d-d-dora
D-d-d-d-d-dora Dora Dora Dora the Destroyer
          
          Dora!
Boots and serial killer destroyadora
I need your help
Grab your kids
          Let's go!
Jump in!
Vamos a destruir
You can't steal my kids! hey! hey!
          Hey! Hey!
D-d-d-d-d-Dora
D-d-d-d-d-Dora
D-d-d-d-d-Dora
D-d-d-d-d-Dora
          Phil, no stealing
Phil, no stealing
Oh damn !
Dora The Destroyer!!!
          
          
          
          

ChoxolateKing

Thanks for voting on the chapters on my book

LeStatiqueVoiture

Thats fine. Its open until people begin to apply.
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ChoxolateKing

@LucioBen I won't be able to join the contest till I am complete with my story Death Snatcher, but I will definitely join later
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