Le_Crooked-Man

I don’t know if I already asked this but what did y’all think of my Dead Base, Endless Space chapters? What did I do well on? What did I not do well on? All that. Obviously I took elements from both Dead Space and Voltron but this was my first original mini story.
          	
          	Constructive criticism is welcome and I love to read your really long comments!

GhostEnzeru

@Le_Crooked-Man it was really interesting and made me feel nostalgic.
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CHGAMER3

@Le_Crooked-Man it was good really don't see that much dead space stuff so I thought it was ohay
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Sofiecitton

@Le_Crooked-Man I'll be honest i really like it made me forget i was reading a voltron fic and how you described the graphic scenes were absolutely beautiful
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MariusB05

Hey man, you’re holding up okay?

MariusB05

Okay looking forward to it and don’t push yourself, you’re human like everyone else. Take all the time you need
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Le_Crooked-Man

Don’t you just love when so much happens in a week? I sure do!
            
            I have a plan for my stories. I’m gonna force myself to finish that Ben 10 chapter then attempt to add to the Pirate’s Life chapter. And, if that doesn’t get some traction, I’ll attempt to continue Voltron. But I still don’t have access to a working laptop so I’ll finish the Ben 10 chapter on my phone, might be a badly worded/written near the end, don’t have grammerly on my phone.
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Le_Crooked-Man

I don’t know if I already asked this but what did y’all think of my Dead Base, Endless Space chapters? What did I do well on? What did I not do well on? All that. Obviously I took elements from both Dead Space and Voltron but this was my first original mini story.
          
          Constructive criticism is welcome and I love to read your really long comments!

GhostEnzeru

@Le_Crooked-Man it was really interesting and made me feel nostalgic.
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CHGAMER3

@Le_Crooked-Man it was good really don't see that much dead space stuff so I thought it was ohay
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Sofiecitton

@Le_Crooked-Man I'll be honest i really like it made me forget i was reading a voltron fic and how you described the graphic scenes were absolutely beautiful
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Le_Crooked-Man

I found the original Voltron from the 1980’s on Crunchyroll. It’s not called Voltron but Golion. It has 1 season of 54 episodes in Japanese. That was the original name in Japan before America adapted the series and changed the name to Voltron: Defender of The Universe and heavily edited. (I googled the details so it may not all be right)

Le_Crooked-Man

Okay, for those who read Six Defenders, or if you don’t I still want your input. I know I asked this a while back but I’m looking for old music to add to Six Defenders and I’m not meaning music from 2000 to now or music from the Guardians of the Galaxy video game.
          
           I’m meaning music from 1990’s and past. Music our parents and grandparents listened to when they were growing up. That’s the theme I want to keep consistent with my character, that he loves old school music and other old stuff.

Delsin-MacGrath

@Le_Crooked-Man
            Ballroom Blitz by Sweet
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SilverNap

@Le_Crooked-Man I just remembered one of my recent favorites as of now is called The Devil Went Down to Georgia by Charlie Daniels
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SilverNap

@Le_Crooked-Man I remember I submitted Welcome to the jungle by Guns N' Roses but if that's not possible I would say either I was made for lovin' you or Heaven's on Fire by KISS. Maybe The Crazy Train by Ozzy.
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Le_Crooked-Man

I know I’m sounding like a broken record at this point, but I’m finally taking the steps to get myself better. But I don’t have access to a laptop at the moment. And I really miss continuing my stories. It’s been so long I forgot some of my plans for them but when I’m in a good place in life and mindset, I’ll get back to writing.
          
          I promise, I’m not quitting this!

Sofiecitton

@Le_Crooked-Man nah bruh take your time get better am not going anywhere ❤️‍
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MariusB05

Take all the time you need my friend, we are here for you. Best of luck
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GhostEnzeru

@Le_Crooked-Man good luck my friend and take care.
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DuskyNote8833

When can you post a chapter for voltron

Le_Crooked-Man

There are sites where I can watch it with, hopefully, subtitles for dialogue. Just have to look.
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whistleDemon

@DuskyNote8833 Voltron is off Netflix now, so it'd probably be a pain to get work done for it
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Le_Crooked-Man

For those who have read Pirate’s Life, what do you think of how I write sword fights? Good? Bad? It’s been on my mind for a bit.

MrTubbyguts

@Le_Crooked-Man Next update when!?!?!
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Ell3sar

@ Le_Crooked-Man  I completely agree with @MariusB05
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MariusB05

I think your sword fights are amazing and very good detail to them too.
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