I totally understand about how being raised effects how you think and speak! My divorced parents, I lived with my religious Mom full time, and got to see my smoking, drinking, and sleeping around Dad, when he remembered me, and boy his every other word was a swear word, and I remember being in 4th grade and repeating it at the time I thought it was appropriate, and I can still feel her hand and I'm Brain damaged and not supposed to remember anything from before May 14th '96, the day I came out of my coma, SUPRISE  I do, remember my growing up years!! Speaking of going on and on ☺️ Lee, ANY time that you'd like to talk,  please feel free! As much as I don't like swearing,  if in your notes to me it slips, I can understand in your environment that's just the way you speak, and some of my friends that I have speak this way, so it's not like I block my friends that do!! Just please write to my Misty4Mark account, because I'm sorry, but I'm going to get rid of this story, because yes I have alot of Regina an Emma stories,  that after I read them I delete them!  Not saying that I didn't enjoy the story but I don't want it on my account with the swearing!! And the only reason I didn't delete this story is because of our talking, so I hope that we can find another way of talking!!!?

Wow,  I honestly didn't expect a reply, and dear I DO understand where your coming from, I'm glad to see that you personally don't use this type of language, and that's just it, in your story IS fictional and your inserting the swearing, why couldn't the fictional town come up with other ways of swearing? Like for the F word that you used ALOT. I'd insert Screw you, and yes I still think this way, because thats how I was raised!! And you may not be a published author, and just writing for fun, but I CAN SEE your work being edited and being published!!! Thanks for the reply!!

I was Misty2Dorothea, and changed my name to Misty4Mark, so you should remember  ALL my complaining about your language, and my comments on what I thought just was not working and why, I still DON'T approve of the constant swearing, but from the way the story went from what I rembered reading I totally APPROVE, because this story IS about them, and that's just the way it needed to go!!!
          So except for the language I liked the story.....

The book new begins is that the book where emma finds out Henry is her son cause I have been looking for that book and I can find it anywhere it's just like urs

Thank you so much. You are very kind. I’m so not a professional writer, I just write words and hope people like them. Thanks again ❤️

LeeHaa, It's been years since I've read this, and the first time I felt that  it was just wrong, and now reading it I can see the differences AND I think you fixed most of what I felt was wrong with it the first time I was reading it!! I still DON'T like OR approve of how much the F word IS used!! But I loved how this story ended, and I loved how you used the advice I had given you!! ❤️ ❤️ 
          
               Misty2Dorothea ❤️ ❤️ 

Do you have a new story? I already read all of them here too many times to count. I just hope there's a new one

I know that you probably speak the way you write, but the thing that bugs me the most with the way you write is the cursing!! Their obviously F-ing, so why scream it out? Yes I get it that it's in the hight of passion and people DO get vulgar at times like this, but I don't like how many times it gets screamed out, and at other times you curse God, and that's the very first commandment OF what NOT to do......
          Ok my ranting is over, but I do enjoy the overall story that you tell so thank you.....

VERY impressed!! I was reading this as you were writing this story AND I can remember how I kept telling you about how you needed to keep them together AND I love that you listened to me and this story is better for it!! Great job!!!

May ask what your next story will be about?
          You don't have to answer if you don't want too...
          PS. Love your stories