Legendofthephoenix17

I have several issues with my current stories. 
          	
          	Devil's will cry is the classic mix of an "im so quirky lol" protag with op stuff just cause. There not much wrong with that when handled well, but in my mind I didn't. There were "plot twists" planned that didn't work due to inconsistent releases and no idea how to actually do them. For example, my big idea for his evil pieces was to just have them not work on him, and go to the hammerspace with his other devil arms, but even that was unambitious. Looking back on it, theres a lot of potential i could have done which probably would have kept me engaged more too. Like I could have had the piece actually work, then have him work towards releasing himself once hes shown that it was a mistake to trade his freedom. I was even leaning towards an Enigma esque sort of thing where his perception of himself placebo effected him into having weakness to holy items, specifically the holy water which other spardas aren't effected by. Lots of decent ideas, but terrible planning. 
          	
          	 Devil trigger was too soon and unneeded, Dante reveal to the others etc, plans that would have been great but were meh looking back at them. As such I have started a rewrite.
          	
          	I don't believe it should be deleted, since It definitely has its merits even how I now see it.  
          	
          	
          	The Gamer has other issues, mainly pacing of skill progression and no deviation from the already made story but I can rework that with a bit of effort. 
          	
          	Regardless, I don't know when I'll get round to these, but changes shall come whenever I suppose
          	

Legendofthephoenix17

I have several issues with my current stories. 
          
          Devil's will cry is the classic mix of an "im so quirky lol" protag with op stuff just cause. There not much wrong with that when handled well, but in my mind I didn't. There were "plot twists" planned that didn't work due to inconsistent releases and no idea how to actually do them. For example, my big idea for his evil pieces was to just have them not work on him, and go to the hammerspace with his other devil arms, but even that was unambitious. Looking back on it, theres a lot of potential i could have done which probably would have kept me engaged more too. Like I could have had the piece actually work, then have him work towards releasing himself once hes shown that it was a mistake to trade his freedom. I was even leaning towards an Enigma esque sort of thing where his perception of himself placebo effected him into having weakness to holy items, specifically the holy water which other spardas aren't effected by. Lots of decent ideas, but terrible planning. 
          
           Devil trigger was too soon and unneeded, Dante reveal to the others etc, plans that would have been great but were meh looking back at them. As such I have started a rewrite.
          
          I don't believe it should be deleted, since It definitely has its merits even how I now see it.  
          
          
          The Gamer has other issues, mainly pacing of skill progression and no deviation from the already made story but I can rework that with a bit of effort. 
          
          Regardless, I don't know when I'll get round to these, but changes shall come whenever I suppose
          

MatthewKing381

@Legendofthephoenix17 in your story devils will cry is it a harem story and if so is rias and the orc in the harem because I really hope so I hate seeing rias and orc minus asia(since I’m fine with issei having asia) being with issei

MatthewKing381

I had my suspicions on some that won’t be part of the harem such as rias but I’m extremely glad that’s the case
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Legendofthephoenix17

@MatthewKing381 yes, and don't you worry, all of the orc, aside from gasper and kiba, will be included. Alongside most of the other women
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Legendofthephoenix17

Well, the impossible happened. 
          
          Queen Elizabeth The Second was caught by the snail. After 96 years, she has passed away. And now we're left with the new king Charles and his son, the Prince of pegging after him. Tis a sad day, and not one anyone saw coming.
          
          Rip to the (former) immortal Queen