Reasonably aged, lives in the US. Apparently my chapters are too long and I have to shorten them to about half the pages per chapter? I don't know, I'm just here because I need my best critic ( @scarletgummybear ) to be able to access my work easily.
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Story by LehuaFlower
The Slightly Hectic Adventures Of...
Story involving the myths about the Hawaiian Goddess Pele. Some myths say she created the islands herself. Ot...
