I just wanted to say — your fanfic is amazing. Like seriously, I’ve read so many over the years, but this one is honestly one of the few that feels so original and real. Nothing feels rushed or forced, and the chemistry between the characters? So natural. You really nailed it.
I love how you wrote Paul, too — not as the cliché player like most people do, but as this layered, grounded, complex character. You gave him actual weight in the story, and that’s so rare. It made me see him in a completely new light.
Also, the overall vibe? It weirdly made me feel so nostalgic — like listening to old Fleetwood Mac songs or The Flamingos, that just hits you right in the feelings. Whatever references or moods you brought in, it all worked together so beautifully. Honestly, top tier. 10/10.I really, really hope you keep writing and posting because this deserves to be read by so many more .Please keep going