Hey, @SarahBunny3. I'm happy that you've enjoyed my books, it was so fun to write those stories, and it gives me pleasure to know that someone else likes my stories just as much as me.
I don't mind giving you some feedback on one of your stories, but please be patient for the feedback from me. I am really busy at the moment and have very few hours to spare in my down time. It could take me up to a week to get back to you with feedback.
Now is there anything specific that you are looking for, like is there something you want me to focus on (Plot, word structure, cliff hangers, character development), or an overall feedback?