KhushiSingh092
Hello actually I am here as to give you some suggestions as in the note you said you were having some trouble with ch so I would kindly request that you read this suggestion and think about it and I have never written a story but I some what thought about it and really I am not an expert like you when it comes to writing story So basically this story focuses on Sakshi and Shivam As Sakshi has given him one more chance to their marriage and relationship and their Masi was arrested because she was the real culprit behind their parents murder but it turned out that someone was behind her and she was not the real villain. The one who was behind her was obsessed with Sakshi and wanted to get her back and he started giving creepy and dangerous gifts and black roses. On their anniversary Sakshi decided to surprise Shivam by giving him Red roses like he gave her when he proposed to her in Paris but she saw him with some other girl (obviously it was a misunderstanding and she thought he was cheating on her) and that girl was a companion of that psyco villain. As she could not see him with other girl she ran away from their dropping that bouquet of roses and as she was running on the road she got hit by a black car whose number plate was hidden. In that car that evil Masi was sitting and she hit her with the car because she wanted to kill her as she wanted revenge on her because she thought she was the reason her plan did not get success but it doesn't end their a punjabi couple who were coming back from gurudwara saw her lying their. They to the hospital on time and saved but when she woke up she had lost her memories and that couple gave her their daughter's name Khushi. That couple took her in as their daughter as she is dead. If you like this part than pls do ask for another part as 2nd part tells us about their daughter Khushi and Shivam I hope you don't mind and forgive me if I said anything wrong or hurt you feelings unintentionally
Lekhawrites
@KhushiSingh092 Okay so first of all thank you so much for sharing this wonderful idea of yours with me.. And i am really glad that you are reading this story of mine.. And it was good enough to make you intrigued.. Your idea is great but i can't make up this new villain right now.. About the characters sakshi and shivam i know they had the worst of all the couples.. And trust me they will get the plot they deserve... But i won't be leaving your idea as i am really intrigued by it.. So can i use this for another new story that i am about to write please
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