LemonSenpai69

Aalright some of you maybe wondering if I'm going to continue the Broly x reader, well yes it is going to continue I have a lineup of chapters to be released on certificate dates. I just wanted to write good a good chapter without any errors and make sure things flow together to get to a good end point of the story. So there will be an update soon.
          	
          	-LemonLord

Alexandralite

@LemonSenpai69 well, how about we practice using comma's? Normally if I'm writing i stop and think, "that's a lot to read without a break to breath." Or if I find myself having to go from referring to one person to another, I use a comma to sperate the references. If that helps at all.
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LemonSenpai69

@Alexandralite Thanks for the feedback love!!!. And just so you know I have dyslexia too so I've been trying to perfect my writing skills with this book. but thanks!!
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Alexandralite

@LemonSenpai69  I've just started reading at your Broly story and I'm loving it!
          	  But it gets a little confusing, this is not criticism.
          	  I would like to just suggest that you use for of these ,,,, 
          	  They help break up those long sentences and help to lessen the use of the word "and".
          	  (PS. I have dyslexia, I've taught myself to read, write and spell, so I'm not perfect. I just hope my little tips helps you out and help your story to flow together more smoothly)
          	  Again this is not criticism.
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LemonSenpai69

Aalright some of you maybe wondering if I'm going to continue the Broly x reader, well yes it is going to continue I have a lineup of chapters to be released on certificate dates. I just wanted to write good a good chapter without any errors and make sure things flow together to get to a good end point of the story. So there will be an update soon.
          
          -LemonLord

Alexandralite

@LemonSenpai69 well, how about we practice using comma's? Normally if I'm writing i stop and think, "that's a lot to read without a break to breath." Or if I find myself having to go from referring to one person to another, I use a comma to sperate the references. If that helps at all.
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LemonSenpai69

@Alexandralite Thanks for the feedback love!!!. And just so you know I have dyslexia too so I've been trying to perfect my writing skills with this book. but thanks!!
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Alexandralite

@LemonSenpai69  I've just started reading at your Broly story and I'm loving it!
            But it gets a little confusing, this is not criticism.
            I would like to just suggest that you use for of these ,,,, 
            They help break up those long sentences and help to lessen the use of the word "and".
            (PS. I have dyslexia, I've taught myself to read, write and spell, so I'm not perfect. I just hope my little tips helps you out and help your story to flow together more smoothly)
            Again this is not criticism.
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