omggggg wtffff i just saw this! i’m so sorry to be responding so late!! Yes, I'll give you critiques, and I'm also open to them as well. I am also a student in college, so I completely understand not fully having free time. What I will say is that your story has potential!! What helps me is realizing when my writing isn't what I envision for my first published book. Knowing that im practicing and getting my writing out there helps me keep going! i am so happy to have found your story, and i can't wait to read it unfold
