LeoAizawa666

so my story just gt adopted by @Candy_ropes_kink thank you adopting my story.

vibbi_vv

May I ask what genre your story is? Or what plot are you going for? Like is it dark fantasy, or romance, or maybe an arranged marriage with a bit of enemies-to-lovers? 
          
          I think whatever idea you have in your mind about your story is really good, I bet the plot is amazing. But the readers wouldn't know that if you don't hint to it. (A lil note: I suggest you add a few tags to the story)
          
          I think you should continue writing it. I also have some advise, if you'd like. I can share a few tips that helped me write better. (If you want to write more in the future)
          
          Also, you posted a message about commenting about whether I use certain pronouns or if I'm non-binary, do you mean you want me to comment my gender? If so, I use she/her pronouns.
          
          Tell me of you want some writing advise :) (I know the smiling face looks creepy but it's because I can't use emojis lol)

LeoAizawa666

@ElliotKei thank you so much i didn't even realize that. heh i am usually really good at grammar and stuff.
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vibbi_vv

@LuciferMorningstar_2 I just noticed you published chapter 3 and 4, and like I said I think it would really help if you made them longer. Maybe if you'd like, you could take the chapter that you've written so far and mix them all together, making them one long chapter. Also, there are chapter 3 and 4 but there's no 2, did you forget to publish it? I also recommend you don't use different fonts for writing the main story, I usually (and many other authors that I've read their books before) use the different font while describing dreams or maybe indicating that this word that was in a different font was said differently from the rest of the sentence that the charecter said.
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vibbi_vv

I hope that helped, because I remember when I started I used to make alot of mistakes aswell while writing, and tips on pinterest and other social media platforms really helped me improve my writing style, I recommend you do that too. There are alot of helpful tips and tricks on how to describe emotions, feelings, personalities, appearances and much more things that could make a story alot more interesting while writing. Tell me of there's anything else you'd like to know <3
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vibbi_vv

Hi! Thanks for the follow
          
          You probobly followed me because of the MHA fanfic, and believe it or not I have like 5 chapters ready, I just don't know why I'm not publishing them. (And I also have to re-read them a couple times for grammer mistakes) So bare with me for a while if you liked the story 'cause I'll publish the other chapters soon
          
          Again, thanks for the follow, I have some more MHA fanfics in my drafts, so I hope you stick around long enough to read them in the future

LeoAizawa666

@ElliotKei your welcome
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