CONNERJackson1214

Can we get more of that mlp story

CONNERJackson1214

@CONNERJackson1214 no worries than
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Leon_Prime

@CONNERJackson1214 I'll try to get around to it but I am currently in the middle of searching for a job so that kind of takes priority
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WinterBlue_Angel22

Hello!✨️
          I have few questions for you:
          
          Q1: How are you doing okay?
          
          Q2: When you will update your DON'T GET COCKY! fanfic?
          
          Please answer my questions I appreciate. ^_^

WinterBlue_Angel22

@Leon_Prime
            Okay, I understand. ^_^
            
            Take your time and take care!!❤️
            
            Thank you for answering my questions I appreciate!! ^_^
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Leon_Prime

@WinterBlue_Angel22 
            
            A1: Fine so far considering the inflation of everything
            
            A2: As soon as I'm able to cause my job takes up most of my time & leaves me drained at the end of the day
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KamenRider-Ohma-ZI-0

Hello there hope you are ok and having a good time

Leon_Prime

@KamenRider-Ohma-ZI-0 whilst we may never see his ending I hope one someone can truly take the torch.
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KamenRider-Ohma-ZI-0

I see and that sad we will never will see the end
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Leon_Prime

@KamenRider-Ohma-ZI-0 I didn't make it some else did but from some looking and chat talking I discovered that the author who was an elderly man that had pass away so the story will never have the same plot while I did copy the story and grammar check it along with making the flow more smooth cause the original was great but there was some misspelling, mainly I think from him not knowing the source, and weirdly there were times the scene seemed to skip like in an old VHS tape I mean it was there but like something was missing from the flow
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Herogamer04

At first i was doing just Aiden and jacen in eostia but i had another idea to also cover taimanin asagi while at the same time doing a time travel for it.

Leon_Prime

@Herogamer04 that's a cool idea, but if i may say there's no separation it seems to be trying to be one story but at the same time 2 separate stories & it completely breaks the immersion of the storytelling while I would normally hope not be harsh in criticism as I hate it as much as everyone else does but I just had to speak my mind. Now if I was in your shoes I would make 2 stories where they occasionally interact/talk like a ova in an anime no, offense you do it your own way but all I can ask is for a boarder of sorts so the reader don't have to keep hoping in & out of the 2 stories, that's all that I can ask but the choice is ultimately up to you.
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