LeonardoPerezHernan0

@ AdairPrezcarrera  arde

@LeonardoPerezHernan0 Solo quiero ver la reacción de Wolverine de *Evolution* al ver a Wolverine del 92 intentando ligar con Jean.

@ Starlord984  no 

@ chuyduranGO  bien 

I hope I haven't made you angry or left you with the impression that I was criticizing you; it was just a piece of advice I gave you.

@LeonardoPerezHernan0 Here’s a second piece of advice: if there are scenes where the protagonist hooks up with a married woman, try to make her show a little resistance. That way, if a reader sees it, they won't say it felt forced—there are always people who say things like that.

@LeonardoPerezHernan0 When writing a story about Spider-Man or another character that includes "lemon" (sex) scenes, try not to overuse suction sound effects or moaning; also, include a few different sexual positions to make the part of the chapter involving the sex scenes spicier.

@ AdairPrezcarrera  si ya entiendo 

@LeonardoPerezHernan0  bro acabo de hacer 2 one shots si quieres puedes ir a verlos

@ AdairPrezcarrera  no pasa nada