Thank you thank you thank you! You've got decent grammar and punctuation, not bad, I think. You might be able to get to the Watty's, I've read some of the winners and yours could actually prove competition, too bad your Adventures one can't enter though your second one seems promising, the way it's coming along. Good work! I was hoping if you could give any opinion on my story http://www.wattpad.com/story/4139747-tommo-the-bestie it would be awesome.You have to have to have to enter the Tommo one into this year's Watty's, I reckon you have a chance. Oh, and I like the fact you haven't used Louis, Liam or Zayn because I personally don't like it when author's automatically break them up with their current girlfriends for the sake of their plot line, I also would personally find it hard to write about them like that.