My new job and some summer projects (like painting the outside of my house), has pulled me away from my writing somewhat. Things have slowed down enough now that I've started putting some more time into my novel, which has made me super happy. I'm currently working on the first draft of Chapter 9 but have hit a snag. At first I was writing it as if a character was verbally explaining backstory stuff, but decided it might be better to write it out as a type of flashback. Based on some advice I thought it showing would be better than telling. Anyone out there curious as to see both versions?