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@tsimmons848 once again, I thank you as i feel as your advice impacted my writing a lot. I found myself getting confused at times as well

@tsimmons848 definitely. Usually, when its between 3 or less characters, the use of characters name can be seen as repetitive.  Its important to know that "intent" is important and doesn't exactly need to be confronted unless change of scenery or dialog. So, it no names are mentioned in between dialogs, it you are unsure of who is speaking, remember that each character only gets a block per speech. If they're going back and forth, then its a conversation between the two stated character. Thank you for the feed back and I will re-edit the series for clarity as soon as possible

@tsimmons848 yeah. Probably for the best tbh. It was bound to not be all that great. 

@tsimmons848 Thursday for sure

@tsimmons848 it should publish now, lamow. I was having internet issues but that's fixed at the moment.

It past 3pm

@tsimmons848 3pm Western. Maybe sooner. I'm going over some edits rn.

@tsimmons848 It'll be my take on toxicity within ebony relationships. It was hard deciding what they're story was going to be. But the Huey x Cindy idea reminded me if what most black men in my family go through. Or put people through. But yeah, I'm still working exactly on how exactly I want it to end. But I'm nearly 3/4ths done with it.