LeshawnGeeS

I'm going to extend Complicated by a few chapters. I hate how I originally ended it

dayanthony011

Hey there author

dayanthony011

@LeshawnGeeS ok
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LeshawnGeeS

@dayanthony011 bet bet. I'ma brainstorm for a while, and hopefully I can have something by sometime next month. It's been a while since I watched Billy and Mandy, so I'm going to have to rewatch it before writing.
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dayanthony011

Maybe make a romantic/silly genre around this story and the characters. Serious vibes if ur cool. You could create some miraculous way for both guys to meet each other either in Woodcrest or Endsville
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LeshawnGeeS

Also, the reason I took down the fanfics is because of the guideline changes. When they took my original book, which I decided to rewrite,  I was going through my first major breakup (which wasn't even a break up. I woke up and they were gone) and RAD was they only thing that I had left. Was going to move to Inkitt but their layouts a little confusing. Anyway, I'm editing and will be making small changes to RAD overall. And I promise, I'll stop re-uploading it after this lmao

tsimmons848

Can you add the characters name in some chapter, before they said something, because I can’t tell which one is talking.

LeshawnGeeS

@tsimmons848 once again, I thank you as i feel as your advice impacted my writing a lot. I found myself getting confused at times as well
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LeshawnGeeS

@tsimmons848 definitely. Usually, when its between 3 or less characters, the use of characters name can be seen as repetitive.  Its important to know that "intent" is important and doesn't exactly need to be confronted unless change of scenery or dialog. So, it no names are mentioned in between dialogs, it you are unsure of who is speaking, remember that each character only gets a block per speech. If they're going back and forth, then its a conversation between the two stated character. Thank you for the feed back and I will re-edit the series for clarity as soon as possible
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