Seokjin_Biased_

Hey! I inow this is random but I just wanted to catch up on you. How have you been? :)

Seokjin_Biased_

@Leslie2300 hey no problem, it's good to hear that you're quite alright :)
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Leslie2300

@Seokjin_Biased_  Hey sorry I have been missing for a while I have been through so much but I'm back and trying to get my inspiration back hopefully you are still here.  I hope to hear from you soon. Thank you for being a loyal reader and worrying about me. These times are difficult and I hope to hear that you are alright. Hugs and kisses The_GreatStrawberry
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Crys_Tells

Hi
          
          So I checked out your story as you asked and its really good. Especially your writing style. I've enjoyed it so far.  Just a few things. 
          
          1. Separate your texts. Don't write it all in one paragraph cause that makes readers tired. Make a new paragraph everytime someone talks or when something new happens. This will also make people comment more. Especially on parts they enjoy.
          
          2. Since you have such a good writing style I don't want you to ruin it using things like *boom* or *crash* cause that ruins the character's descriptive process.
          
          3. Spelling. But this is just a mistake everyone makes on here. Its hard to point it out because of the way the whole chapter is in one paragraph.
          
          4. Author note chapters. Don't do it. It takes away from the story and also disappoints reader. Simply send a message to all your folowers.
          
          I look forward to the development of your story!

Leslie2300

@Crys_Tells thank you very much ❤
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