AinzOoal7

Ok i finally finished VOL 2 now Alex got two bueatys as his harem memebers like Mana and Elane 
          And this vol is the best thing i ever read in this app and it's truly has peak character development and really amazing (NSFW)
          
          
          But i have a question about your novel book cover ?
           The woman in this book cover is Elane or this blonde woman will be in the VOL 3 of the novel? 
          
          I'm just thinking it's the Pirate big tite lady Elian

Letha1Bacon

@AinzOoal7  It's definitely Elane.  The cover is for Vol 3. Vol 2's cover was Mana and Vol 1 was Yua.
            
            Also, l'm glad you liked it!
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AinzOoal7

And my favourite sexy character in your story is that one Map maker pirate woman 
          
          And her only request to breed that gorgeous woman us just find her a new island or a new place to explore and then, Congratulations! You got yourself a wife that really really REALLY Likes ANAL

Letha1Bacon

@AinzOoal7 You can bet there will be more of her   ;)
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AinzOoal7

And to tell you my friend 
          
          Your character "Alex" is really awesome in this book and the character development was PEAK FICTION 
          
          Keep writing FIRE AUTHOR 
          
          
          https://images.app.goo.gl/ZxZcenN4UuxYvmc96

Letha1Bacon

@AinzOoal7 Well thank you anyways. And that sounds fun and, hey, wattpad is basically the home of fanfiction. Why not take a crack at it?
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AinzOoal7

@ Letha1Bacon   no need to thank me
            Im just a fan of your work and I'm gonna hype it up until Alex can breed that pirate woman (the Map maker in the volume 2) and Him turning into a great power and powerful person in this new world 
            
            And to tell you the truth, i always imagine myself as a powerful being that your character summoned by mistake and me being that right hand of his master Alex and always asks alex if anyone insults his master then I'll go UNLEASH HELL ON ANYONE WHO TRIED TO HURT HIS MASTER AND HIS WIFES
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Letha1Bacon

@AinzOoal7 Thank you. it means a lot to hear that. :D
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AinzOoal7

Not gonna lie man
          
          Yua is like the "The Divine general Mahoraga" in this isekai world that Alex is in
          
          
          Alex:" WITH THIS TREASURE I SUMMON,
          MY HORNY CAT WIFE YUA!!!!"

AinzOoal7

@ Letha1Bacon  If you know about a anime called "Jujutsu kaisen" and theirs a teenage character with black hair called "megumie fushiguro" and he can summon 10 creatures from his shadow by doing hand signs that looks like animals but the last summon is a Angelic looking shikigami called "Divine general Mahoraga" that summoned beast can Adapt to anything and any fighting styles and other opponents powers
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Letha1Bacon

@AinzOoal7 IDK what you're talking about but horni cat waifu ftw!
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praise2005

A trash work too corny it needs to be more interesting not making too many foolish mistakes

Letha1Bacon

@praise2005  Then why not say that instead of blanketly attacking my work? 
            Also, too fixed on the main heroine? It's a love at first sight scenario that, along with his lack of experience in interpersonal relationships, causes him to make a massive mistake that introduces the main conflict of the  plot. She starts off hating him because she thinks he's the evil master she'd been taught to expect would own her some day, but grows to like  him because he treats her like a person instead of the slave she is. They also survive life several and death situations together, some times with him risking his life for her on top of helping her reach her own goals of getting stronger thanks to his abilities affecting her. 
            They started off on a bad leg, but he EARNs her faith, loyalty and love.
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praise2005

@praise2005 how it's too fixed on the main character being too attached to the heroine  it's too predictable, too direct there should atleast be some mystery not just blind faith and loyalty
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Letha1Bacon

@praise2005  And what mistakes are you talking about?
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