Lexie482

Going camping this weekend so I have no time to upload at all sorry and I might have to put a book on hold for a while until I finish one.What book should I put on hold?? Tell me 

T-Arth

Hey.... You have some good ideas, but...
          From one writer to another. Just go over your stories again. I could hardly even read the description of any of them. The titles are also too long as Glamj6 said. Be smart and creative. 
          They're good ideas, but the whole spelling, grammar and such needs a lot of work.

LastxKingsxQueen

I like ur stories, but the titles may be too long. 
          
          In stead of: "I am mated to the alpha's son other known as my best friend."
          you could have: "My best-friend, My alpha, My mate"
          
          Instead of: "Im the worst wolf in the pack and im the alphas daughter"
          You could have: "The Worst Apha's Daughter"
          
          
          Good luck & God's Favor on Ur books!