Lezbyterian

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Alright so here's the deal.
          	
          	I started to write something a few months ago because I had this thought that I was good at writing. Yikes.
          	
          	Anyway, I stopped writing it because the prompts I chose naturally pushed me toward a true story that I thought I was ready to write and was absolutely not. It kicked up a lot of nastiness for me and I'm still working through it, but I also decided Jessie's story needed to be told. 
          	
          	I didn't at all like how I started it though so I completely re-wrote it and there's like, story beats, outlines, and all kinds of shit now. Jessie deserves that, so I did it right.
          	
          	I'm roughly 3/4 the way through the book, so I figured while I finish up the last 10 or so chapters I'd start posting them for y'all on a schedule. 
          	
          	I would absolutely love any feedback y'all have for me, especially constructive criticism on prose, development, and pacing.
          	
          	Looking forward to seeing what y'all have to say!

Lezbyterian

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@Mickey_daretolove shit thank you! I didn't notice the cover didn't upload right. I'll get it fixed. :)
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Mickey_daretolove

@Lezbyterian I added your story to my library! :-) Just wanted to let you know that your cover might not be how you like it to be, with all the white surrounding it. :-)
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Lezbyterian

The schedule for Jessie's Girl will be 2 chapters released every Tuesday, Thursday, and Saturday at midnight PST. The first two chapters will be posted in roughly 30 minutes.
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Lezbyterian

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Alright so here's the deal.
          
          I started to write something a few months ago because I had this thought that I was good at writing. Yikes.
          
          Anyway, I stopped writing it because the prompts I chose naturally pushed me toward a true story that I thought I was ready to write and was absolutely not. It kicked up a lot of nastiness for me and I'm still working through it, but I also decided Jessie's story needed to be told. 
          
          I didn't at all like how I started it though so I completely re-wrote it and there's like, story beats, outlines, and all kinds of shit now. Jessie deserves that, so I did it right.
          
          I'm roughly 3/4 the way through the book, so I figured while I finish up the last 10 or so chapters I'd start posting them for y'all on a schedule. 
          
          I would absolutely love any feedback y'all have for me, especially constructive criticism on prose, development, and pacing.
          
          Looking forward to seeing what y'all have to say!

Lezbyterian

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@Mickey_daretolove shit thank you! I didn't notice the cover didn't upload right. I'll get it fixed. :)
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Mickey_daretolove

@Lezbyterian I added your story to my library! :-) Just wanted to let you know that your cover might not be how you like it to be, with all the white surrounding it. :-)
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Lezbyterian

The schedule for Jessie's Girl will be 2 chapters released every Tuesday, Thursday, and Saturday at midnight PST. The first two chapters will be posted in roughly 30 minutes.
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sapph_o0

you do know that the author you have dedicated a whole reading list to supports gal green stein? the zio who supports isnotreal and is pro-genøcyde? when I asked them about it, they even blocked me without a response.

Loiosh

@sapph_o0 I don’t know what comment you’re talking about or what book you’re talking about or what person I supposedly support. You don’t know the first thing about me, nor do I know you. Making assumptions like that does nobody any good. I’m just here to write and read, and nothing else. I have zero interest in discussing things like that with someone who is attacking me over something like that when they don’t know the first thing about me, so please move on. 
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sapph_o0

@Lezbyterian human lives, especially the lives of innocent children, should be part of everyone's 'platform' because, whether you believe it or not, everything we are and do is involved with politics/is political. But I guess not everyone has the same morals and humanity. Naxis would have loved the likes of them istg 
            Very well then,  ciao.
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Lezbyterian

@sapph_o0 they probably did that because their platform isn't about politics. Neither is mine. Thanks for playing. Have a nice day.
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Lezbyterian

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Well shit.
          
          It's been awhile hm?
          
          You asked and you received.
          
          New guided fic up now.
          
          Enjoy!

Alex_writtes

@Lezbyterian chat, haven't been here in a while....
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Lezbyterian

Rewriting all stories to remove g!p mentions.
          
          It was fun for a moment but tbh, it's not really something I enjoy writing and I've been struggling to continue along those themes. It's actually been causing some serious writers block and I just don't want to deal with it anymore.
          
          Sorry to disappoint, but going forward all stories will be v&v, no p.

Lezbyterian

@joshc5683 I love you silly man. Lol
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joshc5683

@Lezbyterian you and I have always been v&v, with no p ;)
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Lezbyterian

Thank you very much for your patience.
          
          I had an intense bout of writers block that stopped me from being able to complete the latest chapter in the one shots book.
          
          It's very hard for me to put myself into a sub POV because I am not, in fact, a sub. Lol.
          
          But alas, the chapter has made its debut! 
          
          Mistress will make an appearance in the next chapter.
          
          Don't worry, our lovely sub will not stay in subspace for too much longer!
          
          Until next time!